tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8616976.post116045062867161400..comments2023-10-17T07:34:53.134-07:00Comments on Yuckelbel's Canon: Fall changeRussell Ragsdalehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06530659064306025325noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8616976.post-1161022150008104972006-10-16T11:09:00.000-07:002006-10-16T11:09:00.000-07:00Sorry Russel the cat commented there I think he li...Sorry Russel the cat commented there I think he liked the poem though as he was purring when he sat on the keyboard. But seriously definately the mood changes perception and makes the memory one of broken glass. I like or at least I have felt something similar.Sue hardy-Dawsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09303253173299793670noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8616976.post-1161021799779470062006-10-16T11:03:00.000-07:002006-10-16T11:03:00.000-07:00bcybcySue hardy-Dawsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09303253173299793670noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8616976.post-1160668098918829072006-10-12T08:48:00.000-07:002006-10-12T08:48:00.000-07:00Thanks gautami tripathy! That couplet was also ve...Thanks gautami tripathy! That couplet was also very important to me. Those types of realizations are in the spirit, not the eye, and that seems to be part of what poetry is about. Thanks for sharing that with me!Russell Ragsdalehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06530659064306025325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8616976.post-1160663198264485872006-10-12T07:26:00.000-07:002006-10-12T07:26:00.000-07:00"There is a nakedness in the lightthat has nothing..."There is a nakedness in the light<BR/>that has nothing to do with clothes."<BR/><BR/>Great imagery. One keepsthinking about that..gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8616976.post-1160621052656054562006-10-11T19:44:00.000-07:002006-10-11T19:44:00.000-07:00Thanks madame b! I Believe in metamorphosis. It ...Thanks madame b! I Believe in metamorphosis. It is more than a hope. Thanks for the great comment and I enjoyed your poetry.Russell Ragsdalehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06530659064306025325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8616976.post-1160593137397507002006-10-11T11:58:00.000-07:002006-10-11T11:58:00.000-07:00"Metamorphosis or death"...fantastic. Like GIVE ME..."Metamorphosis or death"...fantastic. Like GIVE ME LIBERTY OR GIVE ME DEATH. A chrysalis forced to choose...Madame Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07007723927591590306noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8616976.post-1160563765988991152006-10-11T03:49:00.000-07:002006-10-11T03:49:00.000-07:00Hi ozy! Nakedness is just what you have when you ...Hi ozy! Nakedness is just what you have when you don't have anything else (particularly, on). Thanks for the great comment. Glad you liked the endingRussell Ragsdalehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06530659064306025325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8616976.post-1160509313329458042006-10-10T12:41:00.000-07:002006-10-10T12:41:00.000-07:00I'm with Pat (well, not WITH him, not like that, I...I'm with Pat (well, not WITH him, not like that, I never even met him), anything pertaining to nakedness is a glorious thing. And all seem to concur, the end is the bomb.ozymandiazhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07891897071966903895noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8616976.post-1160496262711396572006-10-10T09:04:00.000-07:002006-10-10T09:04:00.000-07:00Hi Pat! Thanks for the thoughts. In this world t...Hi Pat! Thanks for the thoughts. In this world there is already too much of the neither. I am sure that more metamorphosis needs to be going on. Of course you are right, the question is endless. Thanks for the great comments!Russell Ragsdalehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06530659064306025325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8616976.post-1160491769644921552006-10-10T07:49:00.000-07:002006-10-10T07:49:00.000-07:00Of course I prefer the "nakedness" that has everyt...Of course I prefer the "nakedness" that has everything to do with clothes, or the lack thereof. You do pose an ever ponderable question, could it possibly be neither? Well done, my friend, well done!!Pat Paulkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03673667238840127360noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8616976.post-1160470327938264522006-10-10T01:52:00.000-07:002006-10-10T01:52:00.000-07:00Thanks m. shahin! I'm glad you enjoyed this. Tho...Thanks m. shahin! I'm glad you enjoyed this. Those are some of my favorite lines. Thanks for the great comment!Russell Ragsdalehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06530659064306025325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8616976.post-1160470150190073032006-10-10T01:49:00.000-07:002006-10-10T01:49:00.000-07:00Thanks Aurora! What a Hot comment! Glad you like...Thanks Aurora! What a Hot comment! Glad you liked it.Russell Ragsdalehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06530659064306025325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8616976.post-1160464784686460072006-10-10T00:19:00.000-07:002006-10-10T00:19:00.000-07:00"Climb the ladder to the day;climb out of the dark..."Climb the ladder to the day;<BR/>climb out of the dark cloth of night."<BR/><BR/>Beautiful imagery....and I agree with Aurora the ending is great.<BR/><BR/>Keep writing Russell!M. Shahinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00393257894148037599noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8616976.post-1160453261283801782006-10-09T21:07:00.000-07:002006-10-09T21:07:00.000-07:00Killer of an ending, Russell!Killer of an ending, Russell!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com