tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8616976.post8690409334133775100..comments2023-10-17T07:34:53.134-07:00Comments on Yuckelbel's Canon: terminal 2 Russell Ragsdalehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06530659064306025325noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8616976.post-27517967080839099212012-11-14T18:31:47.889-08:002012-11-14T18:31:47.889-08:00I'm glad you liked those lines. Thanks for le...I'm glad you liked those lines. Thanks for leaving a comment, it is always great to know what people think. I'm honored to have introduced you to a new word. I hope its use brings you pleasure.Russell Ragsdalehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06530659064306025325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8616976.post-28703069814773910892012-11-14T15:20:00.009-08:002012-11-14T15:20:00.009-08:00I like your poem,especially
the words "from k...I like your poem,especially<br />the words "from kitchen dreams<br />at cold tile mornings"<br /><br />I looked up paltry,a new word for me & I will use it.I am in Mod Po with Al & the gang.Regards,lindarinebirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05585696559770225002noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8616976.post-54270765084143515122012-11-14T07:49:04.428-08:002012-11-14T07:49:04.428-08:00Hi Susan, in his 2000 book Your Name Here Ashbery ...Hi Susan, in his 2000 book <i>Your Name Here</i> Ashbery invites the reader to participate in the poems frequently. In the poem <b>Terminal</b>, he invites us to make a poem about the wall in the garden. So I did, using basically the same non-narative approach he used. I love his mysterious pronoun use and the way seeming other grammar errors open the poem out so the reader becomes more creatively involved i what the poem is able to do. I tried to incorporate those things plus the themes that seemed important in his orriginal poem. <br /><br />As a poet, it is important to learn how to do things that are usefull in good poetry. I'm always afraid my early attempts will seem a little clumsy. I appologize if they are.Russell Ragsdalehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06530659064306025325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8616976.post-88815318900911623652012-11-14T05:25:36.949-08:002012-11-14T05:25:36.949-08:00This is a beauty, Russell. A wonderful homage to J...This is a beauty, Russell. A wonderful homage to JA, and particularly "Some Trees."Susan Scheidhttp://prufrocksdilemma.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.com