fuzzy friends with car seat memoriespears that blush but do not appleaxe sharp lifeto fell a cactusthe dirtier dog is meanin his eyessharp images stick like pinstears are naturalin such bright light
pears that blush but do not appleWhat exquiste verdancy. :)
Another gem to "dazzle" the poetic addiction!! Good one Russell!!
Thanks lometa! Your scholarly paintbrush colors my poem with your sophisticated sense of hue. Thanks for the great comment.
Thanks Pat! I'm happy to get such gracious words from the master jeweler himself. Thanks for the great comment!
Truly I am dazzled here. Wonderful work.p.s. stay away from those sharp images or wear safety goggles
Thanks ozy! I'll try to be more careful but your brilliant words left me blinking. Glad you popped by for a look.
This is quite brilliant.the dirtier dog is mean Yes. He has every right to be.in his eyessharp images stick like pins Only a dirty dog has to work as hard and remember with sharper detail that which he can use when others have forgotten.tears are natural in such bright light It's natural to be sensitive in the face of truth. It's like the sun.This is how I read it. I hope you don't mind.I love this! It's so human.
Good read sweet QN! Sensitivity is a brilliant read on that line. There are supposed to be some Rorschach qualities inherent in the design of this poem, so I won't say too much more for fear of overinfluencing. But the short form of what I have to say is that your estimations are brilliant! Thanks for the great comments!
I think we often look for the dirtier dog so we can feel better about our own failings, it's the human condition. As if comparing our selves to some-thing-one worse some how makes us cleaner
It is the human cindition for sure, Sue.
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