The snow writes a poem
to the earth about silence
the wreck of the moon
breaks again in a pond
as it freezes
looking a little
like the sparkle
in a lover’s eyes.
I stroke the face
of the lover
with my words
the lover is old
sleeping quietly
peace crosses her face
in the pale light
as we succumb
to the old dream
of winter.
Friday, January 19, 2007
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14 comments:
Wow!
Russell, you're taking your poetry to new depths and explorations, aren't you?
Excellent and compelling!
Thanks Aurora! I'm doing my humble best to push the edges of my little envelope. What a fantastic comment, glad you liked the poem!
Timeless moments...
russell my dear, i know i don't comment much here, but i thought i ought to let you know that i'm reading and loving every line. i think, too, that the more you write the better it gets. keep up the fine work ^_^
xoxox
katy
Thanks gautami tripathy! Yes, they do exactly feel as if they are timeless. I'm deligted the poem gave you that sensation. Thanks for the wonderful comment.
Hi dear sweet Katy! What a pleasure to see your comment. I'm so glad you have been enjoying my poems and thanks especially for taking the time to leave a note. I'm delighted you enjoyed this. Thank you so much for all those encouraging words. I can't tell you enough how much I appreciate them! xoxox my sweet!
The new moon must be bringing the romantic part of our natures out. Seems to be a rash of "love poem" going around. Wonderful poem!! # movies?? I'm impressed!!
Thanks Pat! Good old lunacy and rashes! Thanks for the wonderful comment, my friend.
the wreck of the moon
breaks again in a pond
So beautiful an image, dear. I could imagine the ripples of moonlight on the surface. ^_^
Thanks dear soulless! Yes that is exactly the image, flashing brightly and moving like the sparkle in a lover's eyes. I love that image too. Thanks for the wonderful comment, my sweet.
absolutely loved it!!!!!
Thanks Gulnaz. I'm glad you loved this. Thanks for the wonderful comment, I'm so happy you came for a visit.
I love that first stanza--I can see the train of thought breaking and reforming--so beautifully--
Thanks firebird! I have enjoyed reading your fine poems and am greatful for your wise and appreciative comment on my humble lines. I'm glad you found this enjoyable. You are always welcome here!
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