Liquid music
moonlight
floating on the
surface of a
puddle
makes us
calm
a tonic
we drink
or
memories
rippling in and out
of workweek
days in
vacation moments
that settle in
the sun quietly sinking
down the ocean a trillion lives deep
Monday, March 12, 2007
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8 comments:
Hypnotized by the magic of the moon's reflection, my mind wanders to greener pastures. Any forth coming publications??
Hi Pat! I'm always glad to hypnotize you a little with a poem. I hope to have more submissions off this week. How about you?
I'll keep you posted. Thanks for asking.
I like this mystery, Russell!
Hi sweet GST! I'm glad you do. Thanks for telling me that.
This moves very well. Excellent, Russell!
Thanks Aurora! I was paying special attention to the pace and flow of this poem so I'm glad your discerning eye picked up on that. Thanks my sweet, for the wonderful comment.
Truly beautiful Russel
Thanks Sue! Thanks for such high praise.
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