Monday, March 12, 2007

fluid mood mystery

Liquid music
floating on the
surface of a
makes us
a tonic
we drink
rippling in and out
of workweek
days in
vacation moments
that settle in
the sun quietly sinking
down the ocean a trillion lives deep


Pat Paulk said...

Hypnotized by the magic of the moon's reflection, my mind wanders to greener pastures. Any forth coming publications??

Russell Ragsdale said...

Hi Pat! I'm always glad to hypnotize you a little with a poem. I hope to have more submissions off this week. How about you?

I'll keep you posted. Thanks for asking.

gautami tripathy said...

I like this mystery, Russell!

Russell Ragsdale said...

Hi sweet GST! I'm glad you do. Thanks for telling me that.

Anonymous said...

This moves very well. Excellent, Russell!

Russell Ragsdale said...

Thanks Aurora! I was paying special attention to the pace and flow of this poem so I'm glad your discerning eye picked up on that. Thanks my sweet, for the wonderful comment.

Sue hardy-Dawson said...

Truly beautiful Russel

Russell Ragsdale said...

Thanks Sue! Thanks for such high praise.