wow russ...this is nice... i think the dog is cute with fleas, ill deflea him... ~_^
Thanks Gerald! Summer is a rather itchy season, I think our metaphorical pup will keep you pretty busy. Thanks for the happy comment.
I like the way you use words in this poem. So compactly said, yet so much. Good one!
Thanks Pris! Glad you liked it. Minimal words with maximum meaning is on of my areas of striving so thanks again for that article on translation of Basho.
Change of season, eh (that time of the year, where you are?). Aww, but the image of the pup being left behind... sniff. (I know, I know, I'm being literal, but I lloooovvveee dogs. So there. ;) Heehee.)Summer's leaving me, too. Hello, rainy season. ;)
See the russell sonnet for you in the next post! Thanx my sweet! ;-]
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