This conjures up so many images, as randomly placed as an idea :))The beauty of your poem is its simplicity!:)
Thanks for the great comments, Pins! I've been meaning to do some more experimentation with this form. It is interesting but the strokes must be just right or the poems don't work at all.
Chipped paint and thoughts seem to fit well together!! Good one!!
So much implied in so few words. Well done.
Thanks Pat! I've been enjoying you latest works very much. I'm glad to have your kind words.
Thanks Aurora! Images can really compress information. Your last love poem was a knock-out,BTW! I glad you liked this.
Written in a true wabi-sabi spirit.I enjoyed it.Spasibo
I like this it's a snap shot poem intense and of the moment
Natalia, welcome. I'm glad you came for to my blog. Thanks for the kind comment. I enjoyed visiting you an will link up soon.Pozhaluyista e na zdarovia
Thanks Sue! The closer I get to a minimalist Langpo poem, the more I'm returning to the haiku. Glad you liked it!
Hi russell,This one is really great, the suspense is superb and it leaves so much for the imagination to fill in. Take care,Bob
Thanks Bob! Glad you liked it.
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