Tuesday, April 18, 2006

naked echo

tired dervish

exhaled breath of water


contemporary rhythms

falling aluminum cans

worn out gears winding down

brain trust rainy days

side to side shuffle


standing still

that holding pattern for possible

6 comments:

Queen Neetee said...

As real and hurried as an everyday life.

falling aluminum cans They can be heard so clearly here.

WONDERFUL!

Russell Ragsdale said...

Thanks QN! You should read the poem Stripped Text 20 at Crag Hill's peotry scorecard. Thanks for the great comment!

Sue hardy-Dawson said...

I see you in this in a flurry of racing immages stood back and detached

Russell Ragsdale said...

Wow Sue, thanks! Glad you found a view.

temppixie said...

I love that word 'dervish'!

Russell Ragsdale said...

Thanks temppixie! Me too!