tired dervish
exhaled breath of water
contemporary rhythms
falling aluminum cans
worn out gears winding down
brain trust rainy days
side to side shuffle
standing still
that holding pattern for possible
Tuesday, April 18, 2006
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6 comments:
As real and hurried as an everyday life.
falling aluminum cans They can be heard so clearly here.
WONDERFUL!
Thanks QN! You should read the poem Stripped Text 20 at Crag Hill's peotry scorecard. Thanks for the great comment!
I see you in this in a flurry of racing immages stood back and detached
Wow Sue, thanks! Glad you found a view.
I love that word 'dervish'!
Thanks temppixie! Me too!
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