I am that silhouette rain makes
as it falls on me. I cut this invisible swath,
sidling between Betty and death,
squeezing between beauty and the flower,
walking bower heavy under a barrage
of bougainvillea, just a notch below
the breeze and an hour beyond ice melting.
I cut the day with a line
that leads to dark. I am the nothing
in between everything.
Friday, September 15, 2006
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Goreous Russ.
Nothing, though,
does not exist...
WOW!! Started to list a line or two I like, but they're all great!! Love it!!!
Thanks Ozy. Next time a girl gives you some sweet nothins', tell her they don't exist! Glad you liked it!
Thanks Pat! What glowing words. I'm really happy you enjoyed this. Thanks for the very pleasant comments my friend!
loved this one best of all your poems, i think!
Thanks Gulnaz! I'm very happy that you enjoyed this so much. Thanks for the warm words.
The first stanza, so rich with meaning and conviction, with a haunting play of shadows I imagined. Felt the cold, too, at the end. ^_^ Beauty and power of poetry converge here, Russell. Thank you.
Thanks soulless! What enthusiastic kindness you bring, Thanks for the great comment!
Some lovely pictures with a hint of darkness, I like its elusive quality
Thanks Sue! The elusivness come from this being about the something we consider nothing only because we lack a name and definition for it. The title come from a childhood game of naming.
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