sitting there alone with all the pretty words
rotating a golden rumitchka
with silky cold of tarnished vodka
all the pretty birds have flown
darkness becomes frighteningly large
another siege of solitary pillow
discovering how huge small noises can sound
trying to narrow down empty space
to what can no longer be called alone
trying to hone down too numerous words
arrow prayers into expanding distance
hope like waiting for an echo
from a night soft as black silk
with tomorrow like a cliff too far
rock-hard and real but tough to see
under rule of empty stool
closing time is here
14 comments:
pretty words
nice
:)
"Don" I've killed many a windmill night just like that. Well done!!
Thanks Ruela! This is me painting the only way I know how. Glad you liked it and thanks for those happy words!
Hey Pat! Buk didn't drink it all so there is probably a little room left for a few more bar room poets. Seems like I know a candidate or two, my old friend. Thanks for those well crafted words.
Very evocative!
Thanks Ashraf, I'm glad you found it so. Thanks for that comment and I hope things are going well for you now.
tis more compelling to fight those devils of air
for those that render truth to our hearts are just
too
damn
scary
Yes-sir-ree-bob you are absolutely right, Ozy! Sometimes all that is left to do is toddle off one's stool and saunter out into that darkness to hold hands with the night. Thanks for that awesome comment, my friend.
Great title with a body of a poem to match. Enjoyed, Russell!
the pain of loneliness is so tangible in these words.
its a strange pain we all go through, thank god for work and days.
Thanks Aurora! Glad this was an enjoyable and thoughtful experience for you. Thanks so much for that great comment, sweet lady.
Thanks Gulnaz! You have such a wonderful heart. I have known such sorrow so I can write about it but, thank God, it is not what I am experiencing now. For those who must pass thruogh it, my heart breaks with your pain. For you, my sweet Gulnaz, may you never have to walk that unhappy path again and thanks for such a kind and caring comment!
Dot very well :)
Thanks Ruela! What does dot mean?
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