lust always comes first
it is the law of gravity
and inertia that follows
is scholarly
and would be boring
if you could escape it
pain always a breadwinner
hurry you cant delay
the news of your demise
published just today
love
Thursday, August 30, 2007
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12 comments:
Ohhh I like this!!
Thanks Pris! I appreciate your comment.
Nice poem. I like the last line, sums it uo nicely.
Thanks Terry! Ain't it the truth. Thanks for the comment.
wow!! good one! New poem on my blog...check it out.
Thanks Kranti! I enjoyed your poem too!
We could delay, but then the excitement would just come back to bite us where the sting hurts most. N'est pas?
hugely impressed!
:)
Thanks Nick! C'est vrai, moi droog! Thanks for those wise words.
Hey sweet Gulnaz. Thanks for that enthusiastic comment!
good.
Hey KGT! Thanks.
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